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#189 F16 Sleeve Artwork suggestion
Closed: Invalid Opened by nightmoves.

Closed: Invalid
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Before we start printing/publishing stuff for the the F16 Sleeve Artwork I'd like to make a small suggestion about the content on the cover with respect to the F15s and so on that had this but doesn't seem right.

Where it says " We hope you enjoy using Fedora. If so, you can install it to your computer....". The "If so" part makes it seem like a condition, wherein if you like using fedora, go ahead, else what?? Maybe we should have the "If so" part removed.

nightmoves,

I agree, maybe the following edit to that part of the Live CD sleeve will be more suitable: thoughts?

Old Text:

{{{
Please ensure that your computer is configured to boot from
the CD drive, insert the disc into the CD drive, and restart
your computer.

We hope that you enjoy using Fedora. If so, you can install
it to your computer using the "Install to Hard Disk" icon
[on the desktop | in the Activities menu].

For further assistance, visit http://help.fedoraproject.org
}}}

My Edit:

{{{
This CD boots your computer directly into a fully functioning,
yet temporary version of Fedora 17.

Please ensure that your computer boots from the CD drive, insert
the disc into the CD drive, and restart your computer.

We hope that you enjoy using Fedora so much that you will want to
install it permanently. Install Fedora to your computer by using
the "Install to Hard Disk" icon [on the desktop | in the
Activities menu].

For further assistance, visit http://help.fedoraproject.org

}}}
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