hi @williamjmorenor -

we cannot translate the edition names, and I recommend removing them completely as they are not relevant to the content.

the triangles patterns are distorted / stretched - better to go w a flat gradient. its overused a bit anyway, better to only have one triangles pattern for accent than use it for every fill.

otherwise looks good to me but i cannot evaluate content.

oh one more thing the cubo de.... logo, doesnt follow guidelines. please provide much more spaxing between the cubo de... and the fedora logo. should be easy when uou remove the edition logos.

Logo fix

Here's the PNG of the latest:

@searchsam this is getting close! a few more points:

• the fedora logo isn't centered in the four foundations, can you center it and align them?
• the two textures are too much, maybe just drop the texture from the dark blue borders on the top of the grey texture areas?
• the text under SISTEMA Y PANTALLA and GESTOR DE PAQUETES - maybe list in two columns instead of one too tall one?
• some of the triangles before the commands run over the commands, can you do a bit of cleanup / alignment there? see below:

the changes are ready, thanks for all your observations @duffy

@searchsam could you drop th texture from the blue header accent bars and the four f's background on the title cube? then i think this will be perfect. i just think as is therr is too much texture and removing some will make it look more polished.

it's okay, that is, the last changes

@searchsam looks great! @williamjmorenor from my end this looks perfect so i approve this completely, anything else you need for this ticket or should we close?

@searchsam in recognition for your fantastic design work on this i'm adding you to the design team group in FAS. welcome :)

(one quick q, @sam08 noticed this - the adult supervision note in the upper left is still in English - is this ok?)

You're right, I'll translate it.

ok, is ready.